[NIFL-ESL:8373] Re: Grammar question

From: Anna Silliman (anna@handsonenglish.com)
Date: Thu Dec 12 2002 - 11:36:20 EST


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Grammatically you could make it parallel this way:

The Bensons enjoy snow skiing in the winter, 
sitting on benches in the spring, 
and water skiing in the summer.

But would make more sense to re-think the content
of what we want to say about the Bensons.
In other words, sticking with the parallelism
is trying to put a square peg in a round hole.

--Anna



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