Re: [NIFL-HEALTH:3321] Re: To hyphen or not

From: Kathy Bose (kbose@cpha.ca)
Date: Mon Aug 27 2001 - 10:25:31 EDT


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Dear Colleagues,

I think that Chris is right about avoiding hyphenated words if 
possible. I would  tend to write "...shaped like a shell" rather than 
shell-like, or "take care of yourself" rather than practise self-care.

Kathy

>Hyphens are "joiners" and my old AP stylebook says to use them "to 
>avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words." 
>Another use is to avoid duplicated vowels or tripled consonants: 
>anti-intellectual, shell-like.
>
>
>
>>>>  Christina_Zarcadoolas@brown.edu 08/27/01 09:54AM >>>
>At 08:29 AM 8/27/01 -0400, you wrote:
>Re hypthens
>
>In most  field testing of text I have done with low literate readers
>hypthenated words are hard to read - they get mis cued ( should that be
>hypthenated btw?) Simple truth is for low lit readers relying on the visual
>"wholeness" of a word, hyphens are an obstacle to the form of the word.
>
>just my two-cent thought
>:)
>
>Chris
>
>Christina Zarcadoolas, PhD
>Center for Environmental Studies
>Box 1943
>Brown University
>Providence, RI 02912
>(401) 863-7347
>fax (401) 863-3503
>email: caz@brown.edu

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