[NIFL-HEALTH:3647] RE: Readability vs. Understandability

From: Bieber, Linda (lbieber@vha.com)
Date: Thu Apr 04 2002 - 13:08:48 EST


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We have had a task force looking at the readability of patient information and consents in the hospital setting.  We have found the task of improving readability to very difficult but have had some success. Our success has primarily come by using definitions for new terms, improving the format of the information and changing terminology.  I don't believe we compromised on the meaning of the information or it's importance.

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From: Jill Dehlin [mailto:jdehlin@attbi.com]
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I am a PhD student in the College of Education at Michigan State =
University.  My research interest is in readability vs. =
understandability of health education materials. =20

I have a hunch about the use of readability formulas in the creation or =
modification of health education materials that I would like to =
investigate.  My hunch is that using readability formulas will sometimes =
dilute important information that needs to be conveyed to the patient. =20

I am looking for real-life examples in the field or comments regarding =
your notion of "readability."  How is it more than counting polysyllabic =
words and number of sentences?   When have others (or yourself) tried to =
improve readability at the risk of excluding important information?  =
Again, examples would be terrific!

Thanks for your input.

Jill Dehlin, RN, CHES
PhD Candidate, Learning, Technology, and Culture
College of Education
Michigan State University
East Lansing, MI

jdehlin@attbi.com

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