Return-Path: <nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov> Received: from literacy (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by literacy.nifl.gov (8.10.2/8.10.2) with SMTP id f992Wq019379; Mon, 8 Oct 2001 22:32:52 -0400 (EDT) Date: Mon, 8 Oct 2001 22:32:52 -0400 (EDT) Message-Id: <20011009022752.WBY16491.femail8.sdc1.sfba.home.com@[24.20.244.164]> Errors-To: listowner@literacy.nifl.gov Reply-To: nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov Originator: nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov Sender: nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov Precedence: bulk From: "Joseph Goulart" <goulartj@home.com> To: Multiple recipients of list <nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov> Subject: [NIFL-WORKPLACE:317] Re: Effect of clearer contraceptive pill X-Listprocessor-Version: 6.0c -- ListProcessor by Anastasios Kotsikonas Content-transfer-encoding: 7bit Content-type: text/plain; charset="US-ASCII" X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express Macintosh Edition - 4.5 (0410) Status: O Content-Length: 1636 Lines: 48 Hi Dave -- I thought this was very interesting. I spent an hour or so trying to find additional info on the wording change and the effect it had. Was anyone else aware of anything or able to come up with something? So many times documents are written above the average reading level which basically turns them into "advanced jargon"! I guess it all depends upon who is writing the piece and their understanding of the intended audience. -Dolly Goulart ---------- >From: df@wordcentre.co.uk >To: Multiple recipients of list <nifl-workplace@literacy.nifl.gov> >Subject: [NIFL-WORKPLACE:307] Effect of clearer contraceptive pill instructions >Date: Fri, Sep 21, 2001, 2:07 AM > > Hello all > > I've recentlly come across an anecdote stating that the incidence of > unwanted teen pregnancies in the US dropped dramatically when the > instructions for starting to take contraceptive pills was changed. According > to the story, the original wording was at college level and said: > > 'Contraceptive efficacy should not be assumed until after seven consecutive > days of adiministration.' > > The revised wording was: > > 'Use another method of birth control as a backup from teh Sunday you start > your first pack until the next Sunday.' > > Does anyone know when this happened, and what the actual 'before and > after' figures were? This would make quite a powerful seminar example if it > could be supported by hard facts. > > Many thanks. > > Dave Fox > > The Word Centre > Success through plain English > > df@wordcentre.co.uk > http://www.wordcentre.co.uk > > "Because clear documents make you clearly better to do business with"
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